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[Mickushka]

Well, I'll try...

Waves against the rocks is breaking,
And the light such weak.
Storm's rage our ship is shaking,
But I'll stand my trick.

[Leo]

You says that our love is breaking,
Says "It makes me so weak",
After that I cannot stand, I'm shaking,
Will it be the final trick?

[Julie P]

I like your ideas !

PS: Am I at liberty to correct any mistakes that I notice ? or the authors will consider me just a BORE ? )))))))
(and do the authors need it, by the way? )

[Leo]

Julie P
I think you can set some authors on the right way

[JaySky]

I just want you close, where we can stay forever...
I feel so romantic ah, spring...

[Julie P]

That glowing fire maddened me as dawn was breaking
And got me with entreaty of the weak
To soothe the pain and halt my shoulders' shaking
And free my soul from thoughts that do their trick

Rememb'ring you is like a razor blade
But indivertible is fate..

[Leo]

Julie P
Such an amazing poetry. It makes me think about something beautiful and bright...