В принципе, почти правильно... С минимальными исправлениями:

Gold falls from a tired tree
And the wind immediately steals what was lost
It grabs everything with a strong paw of a predator
And the trees pull hands-branches as a beggar-woman…

Но я бы лучше перевёл так:

Gold is falling from the weary tree
And the wind snatches instantly what was lost.
It grabs everything with a strong predator paw.
And trees stretch their branch-hands like a female panhandler…