Перевод стихов

[Val]

Все же автора нужно указывать. Не так уж трудно и найти.
Это стихотворение написала Любовь Сирота-Дмитрова в 2011г. "Попытка романса". Первое место в конкурсе "Романс" Международного фонда "ВЕЛИКИЙ СТРАННИК МОЛОДЫМ"
http://www.stihi.ru/avtor/shizel2&book=17#17

[kseniya_8]

Все же автора нужно указывать. Не так уж трудно и найти.
Это стихотворение написала Любовь Сирота-Дмитрова в 2011г. "Попытка романса". Первое место в конкурсе "Романс" Международного фонда "ВЕЛИКИЙ СТРАННИК МОЛОДЫМ"
http://www.stihi.ru/avtor/shizel2&book=17#17

Спасибо! я правда не могла найти, может не так чтото делала!

[Максим]

Очень прошу помочь перевести стих, зарифмованно, на английский язык с русского.

I’m not the one. Forgive. You hardly realize it –
The reason why I beg forgiveness now from you,
And yet forgive, my friend, for we in our lifetime
Belonged to someone else and loved someone else too

Forgive me that I dared to live without you closer,
And failed to help the fate to make us duly meet,
This is no guilt of mine, but if there’re some reproaches,
Reproach then none but me. Forgive me, please, forgive

I’m sorry that my bread I’ve broken with another,
That living far from you, unfathomably far,
I couldn’t calculate your ways, or maybe rather
I couldn’t recognize your shiny guiding star

Forgive me for so late, beyond all hopes and dreaming
Our paths have fleetly crossed and for a moment weaved,
Those paths were ever sole, were ever discontiguous,
For all that never was forgive me, please, forgive

We knew each other not, and now I beg your pardon
That I could not protect and shield you from all harm,
Forgive me that I was so absolutely southern,
And haven’t been at all to more north than Moskva

I was no one for you, nor dear, and nor a stranger,
And couldn’t save you when to you I was just nil
From early gray of hair, too early, have to mention,
From wrinkles by your eyes. Forgive me, please, forgive

[kseniya_8]

Спасибо Вам огромное, Максим!!!
Ну просто огроменное спасибо!!!!!

[pumpkin]

Здравствуйте, люди добрые!
Помогите пожааалуйста с переводом стихотворения с русского языка на английский, чтобы рифма сохранилась и смысл. Я перевела первое четверостишие, и в общем мой мозг запыхался. Очень очень очень надо. Спасибо заранее большое. Если кто может помочь, напишите, я вышлю в ЛС Спасибо ещё раз!

Мы оставляем заявки здесь, в теме )

Ладно, исправлюсь, просто стихотворение личное, не хотелось выкладывать, но раз так, то вот:
[....]

[Julie P]

Мы оставляем заявки здесь, в теме )

Ладно, исправлюсь, просто стихотворение личное, не хотелось выкладывать, но раз так, то вот:
[....]

Вы удивитесь, но перевод порою тоже дело довольно личное )
Ловите

I’ll cover with a warming plaid
My feet, and I will cast a stare:
And although right now you are bare,
Of you I’m scarcely afraid

And everyone would clearly give
In to you, as you are so splendid
In nightly shades. For being candid
I ask of you please do forgive.

Upon your cheeks or crow's feet
Will fire fall to never come off,
Your tender glance that might be dreamed of
Is such a happiness to meet

With you I did forget my sorrow
As you hold on to me so tight.
Now gone is my long-standing fright
Just like a storm would leave the morrow.

I won’t forget us side by side
Your hands so tender and so dear.
You’re inescapable, it’s clear..
The wind has fallen outside.

Just take me as I am. For I’m
A bit naïve, and sometimes very
Excitable, assertive, weary.
But dream had led me all the time.

What your heart says does come towards
My very soul to soothe and calm it.
A little bit I am but frightened
And barely can I hear your words.

A pain has caught me to enroll
Or might it be a pleasure mere?
Just like a phantom you’d appear
Are you for real or that’s the role?

Your words and lips are warm. And I
Look for a revelation here.
I fear that you might disappear
And that it’s me to whom I lie.

Your fingers find their way around
My back, you whisper in my ear..
Hoarse is your voice that’s down here..
It makes a loud gloomy sound.

You got so tired with urging me
Not to forget and not to leave you..
You had a glass – not one, a good few
Filled with my grievance and my fear,

And still you say you will be there,
And even if you could desire
You wouldn’t quench this burning fire,
‘Cause we have got this spark to share.

I’m grateful for your being true,
And for this honesty I’m ready
To say the words so long-awaited:
My God, I’m so in love with you!…

[pumpkin]

Julie P, спасибо вам огромное Очень выручили.
Теперь буду вливаться в ваш переводческий коллектив))