По всему тексту встречаются различные ошибки, вот тру-версия, опять же, от офф. сайта
Across the sea to you…
I’ve left myself deserted here again
Across the sea to you…
my pieces are too broken now to mend
In the middle under a cold black sky
The sun will only burn for you and I
In the moment before I lose my mind
These hours don’t mean anything this time
Give me a sign/ show me the line/ maybe tonight
I’ll tell you everything
Give me a sign/ show me the line/ maybe tonight
I’ll tell you everything
Across the world for you…
my reasons have no reason to remain
I’d cross the world for you…
I don’t know what I’m doing wrong
But I can’t stay the same
In the middle under a clear blue sky
The sun can only burn for you and I
In the moment before I lose my mind
These hours don’t mean anything this time
Give me a sign/ show me the line/ maybe tonight
I’ll tell you everything
Give me a sign/ show me the line/ maybe tonight
I’ll tell you everything
Give me a sign/ show me the line/ maybe tonight
I’ll tell you everything
Give me a sign/ show me the line/ maybe tonight
I’ll tell you everything
Give me a sign/ show me the line/ maybe tonight
I’ll tell you everything
Everything
Исправлено
Последний раз редактировалось Ольга; 20.05.2013 в 17:55.
Atrasta Nal Tunsha - Да отыщете вы во тьме всегда свой путь
Исправьте, пожалуйста.
Тут ошибочка вышла. Дело в том, что я не из Волгограда. Я не писала при отправке перевода свой город, поскольку это поле не обязательно для заполнения.
И ещё, заодно, в моём переводе в 6-й строке, в 1-м куплете замените "призрачный снег" на "призрачных снег", поскольку здесь имеются в виду призрачные огни, а не призрачный снег. Это своеобразная альтернатива "мерцающему свету". http://amalgama-lab.com/songs/e/eagl...alifornia.html
Ещё исправьте здесь: http://amalgama-lab.com/songs/p/pet_...sed_to_be.html в 9-м куплете, в 1-й строке в 1-м и во 2-м оригинальных текстах "Don't give me all your love and pain" на "Don't give me all your nothern pain". Вот текст с официального сайта: http://petshopboys.co.uk/lyrics/1225/T
Следовательно эту строчку в первом переводе нужно исправить. Может быть на "не отдавай мне всю свою лютую боль"?
Исправлено
Последний раз редактировалось Ольга; 14.05.2013 в 23:29.
Ольга, помните песню? И тот текст был неверным.
В общем, этот верный, я его много раз переслушал. Тут многовато ошибок исправлять, просто вставьте его на месте старого
[Verse:1]
Baby I've got a lot of questions
You better listen up please
I wanna know what you want and need
To charge up your batteries
You got the flow and the intentions
Boy but have you got the miles (got the miles, got the miles)
Show me you've got the ammunition
That you're g-good for a while (for a while, for a while)
[Chorus]
Charge it up (Charge it up now)
'Cause baby you could be mine
I need a real soldat
Need you to reload it
Bring it reloaded
Charge it up (Charge it up now)
'Cause babe I'm gonna be kind
I need a real soldat
Need you to reload it
Bring it reloaded
[Verse:2]
You b-better rest up your energy
You better reserve yourself
'Cause tonight I'm expecting to get plenty
And I won't do it myself
Conserve your juices cause I'm gonna
Take you on a marathon
I'm not ridiculous, I'm just a girl
Who likes a man who can go long (can go long, can go long)
I like a man who can go long
[Chorus]
[Bridge]
Baby you can check for yourself
I'm gonna spin you when, no doubt, I'm gonna do you right
And I won't complain unless you're buggin'
You can't handle my lovin, tonight, tonight, toni-i-i-i-ight
[Darkchild]
Yo mama, get low mama
Hit the floor mama
Black like Obama
Mad like Osama
I'mma bring the drama
I've got the hall light
If you've got the tosser
... (Say what)
... (Say what)
Hold up, 'fore this room blow up
I'ma release the clip, there'll be no other
[Chorus]
Исправлено. Правда, строки
I've got the hall light
If you've got the tosser
Слышатся иначе:
I've got the whole place
If you get to toss here
Последний раз редактировалось Ольга; 07.06.2013 в 20:36.
http://www.amalgama-lab.com/songs/a/...evolution.html
Группа Army of Lovers вместо (repeat 2x)
поют: I love you
The greatest love is yet to come
I love you
You gotta fight keep hanging on
I love you
Stand together black and white
Sleep united hold on tight tonight
Love is love let’s come together
Love is free it lasts forever
Free is love my contribution
Hail the sexual revolution
Love is love the world united
Love is free I’m so excited
Free is love our constitution
Hail the sexual revolution
Love is love let’s come together
Love is free it lasts forever
Free is love my contribution
Hail the sexual revolution
Вообще то нижеприведённый мною текст дан на основе записи из альбома Glory, Glamour And Gold +
Love is love let's come together
Love is free it lasts forever
Free is love my contribution
Hail the sexual revolution
Love is love the world united
Love is free I'm so excited
Free is love our constitution
Hail the sexual revolution
There's been a way from the start
To ease the pain in your heart
I've come to show you the way
I see the light in your eye
A sparkle from paradise
I have this message to say
I love you
The greatest love is yet to come
I love you
You gotta fight keep hanging on
I love you
Stand together black and white
Sleep united hold on tight tonight
Love is love let's come together
Love is free it lasts forever
Free is love my contribution
Hail the sexual revolution
Love is love the world united
Love is free I'm so excited
Free is love our constitution
Hail the sexual revolution
Reach out and touch let me heal
The way that you make me feel
We'll be together some day
Why limit love two and two
When there's the world me and you
I have this message to say
I love you
So come on baby take the chance
I love you
The time is right for dance romance
I love you
Stand together straight and gay
Sleep united night and day tonight
Love is love let's come together
Love is free it lasts forever
Free is love my contribution
Hail the sexual revolution
Love is love the world united
Love is free I'm so excited
Free is love our constitution
Hail the sexual revolution
I love you
The greatest love is yet to come
I love you
You gotta fight keep hanging on
I love you.
Stand together black and white
Sleep united hold on tight tonight
Love is love let's come together
Love is free it lasts forever
Free is love my contribution
Hail the sexual revolution
Love is love the world united
Love is free I'm so excited
Free is love our constitution
Hail the sexual revolution
Love is love let's come together
Love is free it lasts forever
Free is love my contribution
Hail the sexual revolution
Первые два четверостишья у Вас не совпадают, как и окончание.
Тексты Вы даёте по альбомам или по видеоклипам?
Последний раз редактировалось vladlat; 09.06.2013 в 09:34.